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Heya! Just read this interesting comic by hrwilliams It's called "Across empty skies"
The art is decent and the concept really cool although it did get a little confusing when the story would randomly jump from current to past events and at times i wasn't so sure of what was really happening. I was easily able to figure out what was current and what was not after backtracking though, and if i'd paid a little more attention the first time i probably wouldn't have been confused at all. Again, GREAT concept and pretty intriguing with a lot of potential for the next step in the story.. There was however one thing i wasn't so happy with. I would've prefered page 4 to have been croped a bit more at the bottom. Even 1/4 inch less would've made me feel more comfortable. I'd recommend 1/2 to a full inch less. That's just me though. I'm a fairly modest person who prefers at least somewhat modest comics. Otherwise a wonderful start to the begining of the next adventure. I plan to enjoy more of hrwilliams' work in the near future. :)
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hrwilliams Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2017  Professional Writer
Here ya go!
EeveeRosee Portrait by hrwilliams
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EeveeRosee Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
WHOA!!! This is awesome!!!!! I look like a sleek business woman or something! GIF Gravity Falls - A Pony (Celestabellebethabell)  I really love it! Thank you!
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hrwilliams Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2017  Professional Writer
Thanks so much for the review! I really appreciate your thoughts, which are fair (it was out of my comfort zone too, and I learned from the experience that I need to depict flashbacks more clearly). Was there anything you would have been interested in seeing more of?

The link to your selfie didn't work, but if you send it again I will hop to it. :nod:

God bless!
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EeveeRosee Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
You're very welcome ^w^
I can't really think of much else i would've liked to have seen.... Perhaps it would've been interesting to know more about that one chick he got cuddly with.

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Here you go! Let me know if it still doesn't work.

And God bless to you too! :D
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hrwilliams Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2017  Professional Writer
I'll work on it today! Thanks for the patience, and thanks again for the feedback. :D
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codmaster1 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2017
Thats cool! I like how you review books...Have you ever read or saw the movie fences?
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EeveeRosee Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
I haven't read or watched it. What's it about? fella thinking ( Reactions ) 
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codmaster1 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2017
Well..Its about a family and you as the reader see what happens to them as time goes on...im sorry if this sounds confusing..im bad at explaining stories..^^'
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EeveeRosee Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Not at all! It sounds very intriguing! :D
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codmaster1 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2017
Give a try! I suggest you read the book first!
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EeveeRosee Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Will do:)
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codmaster1 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2017
^^ //hugs Your awesome buddy..
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EeveeRosee Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Yu too! :D
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